27 January 2011

Acerbly

Acerbly 1/27

Three men pour concrete down a hole : ants everywhere
are screaming inequity : breaking the mould so to speak

They are casting the city : taking a record : hours later
they sweep away the earth

All that is left : great gray mass flowing out : ant parts all
over at every angle : inequity sir inequity

2 comments:

  1. Anonymous3/2/11 15:22

    wow! This one is intense. The most acerbic use of "sir" I've seen in a while. Good.

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  2. Anonymous3/2/11 15:22

    that was me, tho.

    Jose

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